Edited Draft

These are the editing marks I made on the first draft of a story turned into me for our upcoming deadline. The writer is an experienced staff member, so I was able to focus more on the overall story and big-picture edits than technical and AP-style fixes.juliaOne of my biggest concerns in this story was the potential for bias. The writer is a known and active member of the Young Democrats on campus and attended all of the mentioned protests as an activist. While this gave her experience she was able to pull into the writing, I didn’t want anybody viewing it as a potential conflict of interest.


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